Blotted Lines

by Peter Dreyer (February 2024)

 

 

The players have often mentioned it as an honour to Shakespeare that [ … ] he never blotted out a line. My answer hath been, “Would he had blotted a thousand.” —Ben Jonson

 

Jonson was right! Superlative he may be,
but Shakespeare also wrote crap—e.g.:

 

With a hey, and a ho, and a hey nonino,
–
In springtime, the only pretty ring time,
When birds do sing, hey ding a ding, ding*

 

Best bards are permitted a rubbish bin
And freedom to flog the trash therein!

Strive, then, to resist the double dutch,
Avoid synecdoches and such;
Never strong-arm a feeble refrain,
The words you win you scarcely gain.
Think, “I’m a poet, and should be still!”
Publish only what comes of its own free will,
Has luggage, books, and a proper name,
Paying no heed to prosodic design.
What is wanted’s just the one fine line
That none but you alone can free.
From igneous cliff and ironwood tree;
Just one line need be remembered, see,
Then followed up through Dante’s woods.
If vexed by the nonnegotiable bill of goods,
O dark, dark, dark, amid the blaze of noon,**
Why, look on the bright side of your doom,

Alligator,
I’ll see you later!

 

*From Shakespeare’s As You Like It.
**Milton, “The Blindness of Sampson.”

 

January 23, 2024

 

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Peter Richard Dreyer is a South African American writer. He is the author of A Beast in View (London: André Deutsch), The Future of Treason (New York: Ballantine), A Gardener Touched with Genius: The Life of Luther Burbank (New York: Coward, McCann & Geoghegan; rev. ed., Berkeley: University of California Press; new, expanded ed., Santa Rosa, CA: Luther Burbank Home & Gardens), Martyrs and Fanatics: South Africa and Human Destiny (New York: Simon & Schuster; London: Secker & Warburg), and most recently the novel Isacq (Charlottesville, VA: Hardware River Press, 2017).

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